Term 2 recount

Click.The lights turned on and it was only 5:30 in the morning.When mum told me that we were going to Ozi so I jumped in the car but mum said thet we were going at 6:00.So I waited and the it was time to go but it took 6 hours to get to Auckland .When we got there,we unpacked and got our luggage loaded on the plane.Tali,Rudy and I sat together and Mum,Dad and Mika sat together. When we were in the air my tummy went funny on little bumps. There was a button on our tv screen that had a picture of food tray to order things on the flight.I got a drink and some entrees before I had a full meal and dessert after it..When we landed I was excited because I saw the lights surrounding the city.

 The airport smelt like I had smelt it before. We drove in a taxi to our apartment.In the morning we picked up our campavan and drove around Sydney for a few hours.We passed water world with huge water slides.From Sydney we went to somewhere in Ozi and camped there for three days.The next day we went to my uncles wedding.It took half an hour to get there.Meanwhile Amos and Miranda were setting  up the wedding (because it was their wedding).We stayed at the wedding for a night and then went home.

I've been working on making my writing more descriptive.

I want to improve my writing by making it more interesting.